KavithaigaL by Rasikas
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KavithaigaL by Rasikas
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srkris:
Here is a song written by me after attending a marriage at Coimbatore a few years back!
srkris:
Here is a song written by me after attending a marriage at Coimbatore a few years back!
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Re: Our Admin srkris ties the knot on the 12th Dec 2010
Pratyaksham bala,
Good poetry, seems well up on the prAsas.
Good poetry, seems well up on the prAsas.
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Re: Our Admin srkris ties the knot on the 12th Dec 2010
Super PB
You have revealed the Poet inside you!
Let us see more of your creations in a separate thread and better with audio if you have set them to music as well!
Let us also have a gala 'poetical shower' (kavithai mazhai) after srkris's wedding. I am sure Punarvasu and Arasi too
will join us with their inspirations...
You have revealed the Poet inside you!
Let us see more of your creations in a separate thread and better with audio if you have set them to music as well!
Let us also have a gala 'poetical shower' (kavithai mazhai) after srkris's wedding. I am sure Punarvasu and Arasi too
will join us with their inspirations...
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Re: Our Admin srkris ties the knot on the 12th Dec 2010
That was a nice 'vAZhthu maDal' PB.
cml,
cml,
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Re: Our Admin srkris ties the knot on the 12th Dec 2010
Dear
srkris, cmlover, PUNARVASU,
Thanks a lot!
Here is one on 'mAppiLLaiyin kanavu':
srkris, cmlover, PUNARVASU,
Thanks a lot!
Here is one on 'mAppiLLaiyin kanavu':
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
Bravo!
Reminds me of Bharathi's மஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à®¤à¯‹à®°à¯ நிலவினிலே...
whch of course brings in a different kind of fantasy...
Have you heard it sung by Chidambaram Jayaraman (I think in the old movie திரà¯à®®à®£à®®à¯)
Reminds me of Bharathi's மஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à®¤à¯‹à®°à¯ நிலவினிலே...
whch of course brings in a different kind of fantasy...
Have you heard it sung by Chidambaram Jayaraman (I think in the old movie திரà¯à®®à®£à®®à¯)
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
கனவில௠கணà¯à®Ÿ காரிகையை கணà¯à®Ÿà¯ மணமà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®¤à¯à®¤à¯
நினவில௠இவள௠மேலெனà¯à®±à¯ நிதà¯à®¤à®®à¯ மனம௠களிதà¯à®¤à¯
உணரà¯à®µà®¿à®²à¯ à®’à®°à¯à®¤à¯à®¤ இரà¯à®µà®°à¯à®®à¯ இலà¯à®²à®±à®®à¯ ஓமà¯à®ª
அணஙà¯à®•à®¿à®©à¯ˆ ஒர௠பாதி உடலமரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯ ஆசியà¯à®Ÿà®©à¯
மணமà¯à®Ÿà®©à¯ நீட௠வாழà¯à®•à¯†à®© வாழà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯ நம௠(Rasika) கà¯à®´à¯à®®à®®à¯‡
(அணஙà¯à®•à®¿à®©à¯ˆ ஒர௠பாதி உடலமரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯ = ardhanArIshvaran)
CML 1/12/2010
நினவில௠இவள௠மேலெனà¯à®±à¯ நிதà¯à®¤à®®à¯ மனம௠களிதà¯à®¤à¯
உணரà¯à®µà®¿à®²à¯ à®’à®°à¯à®¤à¯à®¤ இரà¯à®µà®°à¯à®®à¯ இலà¯à®²à®±à®®à¯ ஓமà¯à®ª
அணஙà¯à®•à®¿à®©à¯ˆ ஒர௠பாதி உடலமரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯ ஆசியà¯à®Ÿà®©à¯
மணமà¯à®Ÿà®©à¯ நீட௠வாழà¯à®•à¯†à®© வாழà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯ நம௠(Rasika) கà¯à®´à¯à®®à®®à¯‡
(அணஙà¯à®•à®¿à®©à¯ˆ ஒர௠பாதி உடலமரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯ = ardhanArIshvaran)
CML 1/12/2010
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Re: KavithaigaL
PB and CML.....absolutely brilliant....the sheer beauty of the language is mind boggling...
CML, on your poem, some where you should try and insert "kumudakriya"...I don't know how but I am sure you can...
PB...Keerai?...mmmmmm...would you consider changing this to anna nadai pottu...unable to relate to a parrot some how!
Please keep it coming....
CML, on your poem, some where you should try and insert "kumudakriya"...I don't know how but I am sure you can...
PB...Keerai?...mmmmmm...would you consider changing this to anna nadai pottu...unable to relate to a parrot some how!
Please keep it coming....
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
Thanks sam
Actually 'keera' is of sanskrit origin meaning a parrot. Hence keervANi is like the melody of the parrot. I agree annam willbe more appropriate.
I actually wanted to weave in 'pavithra' in the poem but the praasam was difficult. I will try 'kumudakriya' (raagam-wise) when I compose for the greetings after the wedding.
This is just a 'wedding shower' for now
Do please pitch in with all of your creations (humourous too
Let the Party begin..
Actually 'keera' is of sanskrit origin meaning a parrot. Hence keervANi is like the melody of the parrot. I agree annam willbe more appropriate.
I actually wanted to weave in 'pavithra' in the poem but the praasam was difficult. I will try 'kumudakriya' (raagam-wise) when I compose for the greetings after the wedding.
This is just a 'wedding shower' for now
Do please pitch in with all of your creations (humourous too
Let the Party begin..
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
Where is Erode - our aasthaana kavi ?
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
Hey! it is December. .Erode must be very busy . wishing him all the best . Probably he does not want his mind to be ERODED by thoughts other than jathis gobilalitha
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Re: Pratyaksham Bala KavithaigaL
Sam Swaminathan:
Thanks for the encouragement!
As for 'anna-nadai', of course, that was the first expression that came to mind. In fact it rhymes with the word 'kanna' in the next line.
However, a few things made me select 'keerai-nadai': Firstly, it satisfies the 'monai' rule. Secondly, years back we had a parrot at home and we use to enjoy its style of walking! Thirdly it suggests 'red-lips' too! (Eyes, temple and cheek are mentioned in the song; 'keerai' helps to refer to the lips.) And finally, it is off-beat making poetic justice!
As suggested by you, I will post a few more. Comments and suggestions are most welcome.
Thanks for the encouragement!
As for 'anna-nadai', of course, that was the first expression that came to mind. In fact it rhymes with the word 'kanna' in the next line.
However, a few things made me select 'keerai-nadai': Firstly, it satisfies the 'monai' rule. Secondly, years back we had a parrot at home and we use to enjoy its style of walking! Thirdly it suggests 'red-lips' too! (Eyes, temple and cheek are mentioned in the song; 'keerai' helps to refer to the lips.) And finally, it is off-beat making poetic justice!
As suggested by you, I will post a few more. Comments and suggestions are most welcome.
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Re: Tamil KavithaigaL by Rasikas
cmlover:
Your poem is wonderful!
The heading 'Pratyaksham Bala Kavithaigal' is embarrassing! I have changed it to 'Tamil Kavithaigal by Rasikas'. Hope this is ok.
Let this thread provide us the opportunity to enjoy the creations of all Rasikas members.
Your poem is wonderful!
The heading 'Pratyaksham Bala Kavithaigal' is embarrassing! I have changed it to 'Tamil Kavithaigal by Rasikas'. Hope this is ok.
Let this thread provide us the opportunity to enjoy the creations of all Rasikas members.
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Re: Tamil KavithaigaL by Rasikas
PB,
Was absent from the forum for a while.
Great verse!
kaTTuk kuDumiyuDanE srkris--aik kaRpanai seidu pArkkiREn!
eppaDiyAnAlum, kaNNukkiSainda kaNavan dAn--
'manadukkiSainda maNALan'--a la HMB
maNiyAna mAPPiLLaiyum kUDa...
mon ami,
Excellent!
kalyANam kaLai kaTTi varugiRadu
Was absent from the forum for a while.
Great verse!
kaTTuk kuDumiyuDanE srkris--aik kaRpanai seidu pArkkiREn!
eppaDiyAnAlum, kaNNukkiSainda kaNavan dAn--
'manadukkiSainda maNALan'--a la HMB
maNiyAna mAPPiLLaiyum kUDa...
mon ami,
Excellent!
kalyANam kaLai kaTTi varugiRadu
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Re: Tamil KavithaigaL by Rasikas
arasi
மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯ˆ டோய௠மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯ˆ டோயà¯
மணியான மதராஸ௠மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯à®³à¯ˆ டோயà¯..
(I guess from மனம௠போல மாஙà¯à®•à®²à¯à®¯à®®à¯ ?)
மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯ˆ டோய௠மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯ˆ டோயà¯
மணியான மதராஸ௠மாபà¯à®ªà®¿à®³à¯à®³à¯ˆ டோயà¯..
(I guess from மனம௠போல மாஙà¯à®•à®²à¯à®¯à®®à¯ ?)
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Re: Tamil KavithaigaL by Rasikas
रामकृषà¥à¤£ उवाच
परिणयाय पवितà¥à¤°à¤¾à¤¯à¤¾ पà¥à¤°à¤¦à¤°à¥à¤¶à¤¨à¤¾à¤¯ च संगीतं।
रसिकसंगॊदà¥à¤§à¤¾à¤°à¤£à¤¾à¤¯ संà¤à¤µà¤¾à¤®à¤¿ दिने दिने ॥
(our RamakriShNa (srkris) says:
To marry Pavithra and for the propagation of Music (CM)
and to promote/uplift the Rasikas.org I strive every day)
परिणयाय पवितà¥à¤°à¤¾à¤¯à¤¾ पà¥à¤°à¤¦à¤°à¥à¤¶à¤¨à¤¾à¤¯ च संगीतं।
रसिकसंगॊदà¥à¤§à¤¾à¤°à¤£à¤¾à¤¯ संà¤à¤µà¤¾à¤®à¤¿ दिने दिने ॥
(our RamakriShNa (srkris) says:
To marry Pavithra and for the propagation of Music (CM)
and to promote/uplift the Rasikas.org I strive every day)
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Dear PB
I modified the title to accommodate poems in all languages.
Hope you don't mind...
I modified the title to accommodate poems in all languages.
Hope you don't mind...
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
cmlover:
ततासà¥à¤¤à¥à¥¤
Here is 'Mappillai Doi' by P.Leela and A.M.Raja:-
http://www.muzigle.com/#!track/mappillai-doi
ततासà¥à¤¤à¥à¥¤
Here is 'Mappillai Doi' by P.Leela and A.M.Raja:-
http://www.muzigle.com/#!track/mappillai-doi
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
here is one on music concert and deepavali:
பà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®Ÿà¯ˆ சரசரகà¯à®• , கரவொலியில௠கைவளைகள௠கலகலகà¯à®•
கொதà¯à®¤à¯à®®à®²à®°à¯ கோதையரà¯à®¤à®® மென௠மà¯à®•à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®²à¯ பà¯à®©à¯à®šà®¿à®°à®¿à®ªà¯à®ªà¯
கூடவரà¯à®®à¯ அபà¯à®ªà®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ ஜிபà¯à®ªà®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ அரைமà¯à®±à¯à®µà®²à¯
பலà¯à®šà¯à®µà¯ˆ பணியாரம௠பல உண௠ட நிறைமà¯à®•à®™à¯à®•à®³à¯
கà¯à®šà¯à®šà®¿à®®à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®ªà¯à®ªà¯ இசையில௠அவை சிவகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மறà¯à®¨à¯Šà®Ÿà®¿à®¯à¯‡
வயலின௠கமà¯à®ªà®¿ வளம௠அதை பசà¯à®šà¯ˆà®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ மாறà¯à®±à®¿ விடà¯à®®à¯
பூசà¯à®šà¯Šà®°à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ கலசம௠போல௠பொஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à¯†à®´à¯à®®à¯ கறà¯à®ªà®©à¯ˆà®•à®³à¯
ராகெடà¯à®Ÿà®¾à®¯à¯ மேல௠விசà¯à®®à¯à®ªà®¿ பூதà¯à®¤à¯ உதிரà¯à®®à¯ " பிரà¯à®•à®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯"
விஷà¯à®£à¯ சகà¯à®•à®°à®®à®¾à®¯à¯ பொறி சà¯à®´à®±à¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ ஸà¯à®µà®° கோரà¯à®µà¯ˆ
நொடிக௠கொர௠வணà¯à®£à®®à¯ காடà¯à®Ÿà®¿ மயகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ ராக மாலிகை
"சாடà¯à®Ÿà¯ˆ" யென சà¯à®£à¯à®Ÿà®¿ சொகà¯à®• வைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மோராகà¯à®•à®³à¯
"தனி" யாக ஆரà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®°à®¿à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ சர வெடி பேரொலிகà¯à®•à¯à®³à¯
"கட "à®®à¯à®´à®•à¯à®•à®®à¯ ஊசி வெடி சதà¯à®¤à®®à¯ உள௠ஒலிகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
காதை பொதà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿ செயà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯ இனà¯à®ª வேதனை
நம௠இசை à®…à®°à¯à®™à¯à®•à®²à¯ˆ சீனாவின௠பஙà¯à®•à¯ இதில௠சிறிதà¯à®®à¯ இலà¯à®²à¯ˆ
அனைதà¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯‡ சிவகாசி தநà¯à®¤ தமிழ௠மண௠தானà¯
அமெரிகà¯à®• ஸà¯à®©à¯‹ விலà¯à®®à¯ பிசà¯à®ªà®¿à®šà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯ போகாதà¯
திஙà¯à®•à®³à¯ தோறà¯à®® ஞாயிறில௠தீபாவளி நம பைரவியில௠!!
பà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®Ÿà¯ˆ சரசரகà¯à®• , கரவொலியில௠கைவளைகள௠கலகலகà¯à®•
கொதà¯à®¤à¯à®®à®²à®°à¯ கோதையரà¯à®¤à®® மென௠மà¯à®•à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®²à¯ பà¯à®©à¯à®šà®¿à®°à®¿à®ªà¯à®ªà¯
கூடவரà¯à®®à¯ அபà¯à®ªà®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ ஜிபà¯à®ªà®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ அரைமà¯à®±à¯à®µà®²à¯
பலà¯à®šà¯à®µà¯ˆ பணியாரம௠பல உண௠ட நிறைமà¯à®•à®™à¯à®•à®³à¯
கà¯à®šà¯à®šà®¿à®®à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®ªà¯à®ªà¯ இசையில௠அவை சிவகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மறà¯à®¨à¯Šà®Ÿà®¿à®¯à¯‡
வயலின௠கமà¯à®ªà®¿ வளம௠அதை பசà¯à®šà¯ˆà®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ மாறà¯à®±à®¿ விடà¯à®®à¯
பூசà¯à®šà¯Šà®°à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ கலசம௠போல௠பொஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à¯†à®´à¯à®®à¯ கறà¯à®ªà®©à¯ˆà®•à®³à¯
ராகெடà¯à®Ÿà®¾à®¯à¯ மேல௠விசà¯à®®à¯à®ªà®¿ பூதà¯à®¤à¯ உதிரà¯à®®à¯ " பிரà¯à®•à®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯"
விஷà¯à®£à¯ சகà¯à®•à®°à®®à®¾à®¯à¯ பொறி சà¯à®´à®±à¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ ஸà¯à®µà®° கோரà¯à®µà¯ˆ
நொடிக௠கொர௠வணà¯à®£à®®à¯ காடà¯à®Ÿà®¿ மயகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ ராக மாலிகை
"சாடà¯à®Ÿà¯ˆ" யென சà¯à®£à¯à®Ÿà®¿ சொகà¯à®• வைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மோராகà¯à®•à®³à¯
"தனி" யாக ஆரà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®°à®¿à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ சர வெடி பேரொலிகà¯à®•à¯à®³à¯
"கட "à®®à¯à®´à®•à¯à®•à®®à¯ ஊசி வெடி சதà¯à®¤à®®à¯ உள௠ஒலிகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
காதை பொதà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿ செயà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯ இனà¯à®ª வேதனை
நம௠இசை à®…à®°à¯à®™à¯à®•à®²à¯ˆ சீனாவின௠பஙà¯à®•à¯ இதில௠சிறிதà¯à®®à¯ இலà¯à®²à¯ˆ
அனைதà¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯‡ சிவகாசி தநà¯à®¤ தமிழ௠மண௠தானà¯
அமெரிகà¯à®• ஸà¯à®©à¯‹ விலà¯à®®à¯ பிசà¯à®ªà®¿à®šà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯ போகாதà¯
திஙà¯à®•à®³à¯ தோறà¯à®® ஞாயிறில௠தீபாவளி நம பைரவியில௠!!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
dIpAvaLiyum, pATTum, pATTai rasippavargaL
kUTTamum kaLi koNDADum *inda SaraDilE,
nam iLam talaivar mangala mAngalyam aNivikkum
maNa vizhA koNDATTattin kudUkalam!
* in this thread
PBala,
Do you happen to have 'mAppiLLai vandAr, mAppiLLai vandAr mATTu vaNDiyilE,
poNNu vandAL poNNu vandAL poTTu vaNDiyilE' in your endless collection?
kUTTamum kaLi koNDADum *inda SaraDilE,
nam iLam talaivar mangala mAngalyam aNivikkum
maNa vizhA koNDATTattin kudUkalam!
* in this thread
PBala,
Do you happen to have 'mAppiLLai vandAr, mAppiLLai vandAr mATTu vaNDiyilE,
poNNu vandAL poNNu vandAL poTTu vaNDiyilE' in your endless collection?
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
arasi:
'mAppiLLai vandAn' in Tamil movie 'kAvEriyin kaNavan':-
http://www.hummaa.com/music/album/Kaver ... avan/14014
'mAppiLLai vandAn' in Tamil movie 'kAvEriyin kaNavan':-
http://www.hummaa.com/music/album/Kaver ... avan/14014
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Thanks, PB!
I just remembered the first two lines of the song, and my, it seems to cover all the bases
Ravi,
To your padinAngum peTRup peru vAzhvu vAzhga--wishes, this is an earthy addition--of course, all in their own sweet time. Then the kavik kuzhAm can pen beautiful lullabies
I just remembered the first two lines of the song, and my, it seems to cover all the bases
Ravi,
To your padinAngum peTRup peru vAzhvu vAzhga--wishes, this is an earthy addition--of course, all in their own sweet time. Then the kavik kuzhAm can pen beautiful lullabies
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Thanks PB
for those golden memories which some of us share. The first song contains a superb saranga sung by P Leela whcih we have discussed here before courtesy of Shankar.
I hope he will share some of the marriage related songs in the old Hindi movies.
Can you find and post
மணமகளே மரà¯à®®à®•à®³à¯‡ வா வா...
Let us give equal time for the bride too
for those golden memories which some of us share. The first song contains a superb saranga sung by P Leela whcih we have discussed here before courtesy of Shankar.
I hope he will share some of the marriage related songs in the old Hindi movies.
Can you find and post
மணமகளே மரà¯à®®à®•à®³à¯‡ வா வா...
Let us give equal time for the bride too
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
I found it! here it is
http://www.dishant.com/jukebox.php?songid=59956
http://www.dishant.com/jukebox.php?songid=59956
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Another song that comes to my mind is 'nALAm nALAm thirunALAm' from 'kAdalikka nEramillai, a beautiful one with classical touch.
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
...and for a bonus and before you ask
http://www.mediafire.com/?gdgho2mmnyn
http://www.mediafire.com/?gdgho2mmnyn
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Lovely! Reminds me of Bharathiar...
Keep going into 2010
சகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯ˆ பகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯à®Ÿà®©à¯ நிதà¯à®¤à®®à¯à®®à¯ தொழà¯à®¤à®¾à®²à¯
சிதà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾à®•à®¾à®¤ தொனà¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ இலயே
சிதà¯à®¤à®¤à¯à®¤à¯ˆ ஒர௠நிலையாய௠அவள௠பாலà¯
செலà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®©à®¾à®²à¯ à®®à¯à®•à¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ பெறà¯à®µà®¾à®¯à¯ நரனே!
-CML 4/12/2010
Keep going into 2010
சகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯ˆ பகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯à®Ÿà®©à¯ நிதà¯à®¤à®®à¯à®®à¯ தொழà¯à®¤à®¾à®²à¯
சிதà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾à®•à®¾à®¤ தொனà¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ இலயே
சிதà¯à®¤à®¤à¯à®¤à¯ˆ ஒர௠நிலையாய௠அவள௠பாலà¯
செலà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®©à®¾à®²à¯ à®®à¯à®•à¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ பெறà¯à®µà®¾à®¯à¯ நரனே!
-CML 4/12/2010
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Now here is the fulfillment of the 'Galatta' that s-p has asked for
http://www.dishant.com/jukebox.php?songid=57933
http://www.dishant.com/jukebox.php?songid=57933
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
à´ˆ പാടàµà´Ÿàµ നമàµà´®àµà´¡ R-T ചേടàµà´Ÿà´¨àµ† വേണàµà´¡à´¿à´¯à´¾à´£àµ
(VKR à´¯àµà´®àµ കൂടàµà´Ÿà´¿à´•àµà´•àµŠà´³àµà´³à´¾à´®àµ )
(For our R-T and VKR specially ... )
"Malabar Wedding"
http://www.sendspace.com/file/eplx9c
(VKR à´¯àµà´®àµ കൂടàµà´Ÿà´¿à´•àµà´•àµŠà´³àµà´³à´¾à´®àµ )
(For our R-T and VKR specially ... )
"Malabar Wedding"
http://www.sendspace.com/file/eplx9c
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Thank you!cmlover wrote:Lovely! Reminds me of Bharathiar...
Keep going into 2010
Would it be சிதà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾à®•à®¾à®¤ instead of சிதà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¤?சகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯ˆ பகà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à¯à®Ÿà®©à¯ நிதà¯à®¤à®®à¯à®®à¯ தொழà¯à®¤à®¾à®²à¯
சிதà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¤ தொனà¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ இலயே
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
You are right!
Corrected since.. Thx
Corrected since.. Thx
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
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How fast the kids grow up and go in seach of employment, leaving behind their parents!
How fast the kids grow up and go in seach of employment, leaving behind their parents!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
BalE, Bala
Wait another decade or two, and you will say what I said in the 'Pauses' thread. Your verse inspired me, I think!
Wait another decade or two, and you will say what I said in the 'Pauses' thread. Your verse inspired me, I think!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
arasi:
Thank you!
I am already enjoying that privilege!
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Here is a drama highlighting the earthly feelings, analytical mind, the reasoning capacity and the decision making power of a ‘pudumaip peN!
Thank you!
I am already enjoying that privilege!
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Here is a drama highlighting the earthly feelings, analytical mind, the reasoning capacity and the decision making power of a ‘pudumaip peN!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
PB
..our arasi is an expert on 'vachana kavithai' which are very thought-provoking!
I hope she posts some of them here. (she may have problems with using the Tamil Fonts which perhaps you can help)!
Now if you excuse me I have to be away for a while for personal reasons.
In the meantime keep posting your creations and I will join you later.
Bye...
..our arasi is an expert on 'vachana kavithai' which are very thought-provoking!
I hope she posts some of them here. (she may have problems with using the Tamil Fonts which perhaps you can help)!
Now if you excuse me I have to be away for a while for personal reasons.
In the meantime keep posting your creations and I will join you later.
Bye...
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Back at home after attending Sri O.S. Thyagarajan's kutcheri at Bhairavi, I read once again Sri Ponbhairavi's song at post #20.
... பூசà¯à®šà¯Šà®°à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ கலசம௠போல௠பொஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à¯†à®´à¯à®®à¯ கறà¯à®ªà®©à¯ˆà®•à®³à¯ ... மேல௠விசà¯à®®à¯à®ªà®¿ பூதà¯à®¤à¯ உதிரà¯à®®à¯ "பிரà¯à®•à®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯" ... பொறி சà¯à®´à®±à¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ ஸà¯à®µà®° கோரà¯à®µà¯ˆ ... நொடிக௠கொர௠வணà¯à®£à®®à¯ காடà¯à®Ÿà®¿ மயகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ ராக மாலிகை ... சà¯à®£à¯à®Ÿà®¿ சொகà¯à®• வைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மோராகà¯à®•à®³à¯ ... ...
How well Sri Ponbhairavi has captured the magic of music!
... பூசà¯à®šà¯Šà®°à®¿à®¯à¯à®®à¯ கலசம௠போல௠பொஙà¯à®•à®¿à®¯à¯†à®´à¯à®®à¯ கறà¯à®ªà®©à¯ˆà®•à®³à¯ ... மேல௠விசà¯à®®à¯à®ªà®¿ பூதà¯à®¤à¯ உதிரà¯à®®à¯ "பிரà¯à®•à®¾à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯" ... பொறி சà¯à®´à®±à¯à®±à¯à®®à¯ ஸà¯à®µà®° கோரà¯à®µà¯ˆ ... நொடிக௠கொர௠வணà¯à®£à®®à¯ காடà¯à®Ÿà®¿ மயகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ ராக மாலிகை ... சà¯à®£à¯à®Ÿà®¿ சொகà¯à®• வைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மோராகà¯à®•à®³à¯ ... ...
How well Sri Ponbhairavi has captured the magic of music!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
PB (Pratyaksham Bala),
Thanks for bringing another PB (Ponbhaiarvi)'s poem to focus.
Ponbhairavi,
A beauty!
CML,
Keeping our fingers crossed. Don't keep us waiting for too long. Come back soon! The best to you!
Thanks for bringing another PB (Ponbhaiarvi)'s poem to focus.
Ponbhairavi,
A beauty!
CML,
Keeping our fingers crossed. Don't keep us waiting for too long. Come back soon! The best to you!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
arasi:
Please start posting your creations!
And your comments on Pudumai Pen kavithai?
Please start posting your creations!
And your comments on Pudumai Pen kavithai?
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
panju lEsAnAlum, valivuLLa kavidai.
aduvum, anda 'onRum' enRa Sol vegu crucial
aduvum, anda 'onRum' enRa Sol vegu crucial
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
wrote this, this evening after coming back in auto, keeping my bike at home owing to rain...
ஆரத௠தழà¯à®µà®¿
ஆனநà¯à®¤à®®à¯ கொளà¯à®³à®µà¯†à®©à¯à®±à¯
ஆகாயமளவிறà¯à®•à¯
ஆசைகள௠பூதà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿà®¿à®©à¯à®®à¯,
சிலà¯à®²à¯†à®©à¯à®±à¯ இரà¯à®•à¯à®•à®¿à®±à®¤à¯,
கà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®•à®¿à®±à®¤à¯ கà¯à®³à®¿à®°à¯ தூறலà¯,
வழியெஙà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ சேறà¯;
வணà¯à®Ÿà®¿ à®®à¯à®Ÿà®¿à®¯à¯à®®à®¾ பார௠- என
கவலைபà¯à®ªà®Ÿ யாரà¯à®®à®±à¯à®±à¯
வாழà¯à®¨à¯à®¤à®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à®²à®¾à®®à¯ - அலà¯à®²à®¤à¯
கசà¯à®šà¯‡à®°à®¿à®•à®³à¯ à®…à®±à¯à®± நாடà¯à®•à®³à®¿à®²à¯‡à®©à¯à®®à¯
பெயà¯à®¤à¯ தீரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à®²à®¾à®®à¯ நீ...
ஆஙà¯à®•à¯ ஒர௠மழை நாளினà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®•à®³à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ பூமிகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
இடையிரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ வாயà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®¿à®´à®¨à¯à®¤
ஈரோட௠நாகராஜனà¯.
ஆரத௠தழà¯à®µà®¿
ஆனநà¯à®¤à®®à¯ கொளà¯à®³à®µà¯†à®©à¯à®±à¯
ஆகாயமளவிறà¯à®•à¯
ஆசைகள௠பூதà¯à®¤à®¿à®Ÿà®¿à®©à¯à®®à¯,
சிலà¯à®²à¯†à®©à¯à®±à¯ இரà¯à®•à¯à®•à®¿à®±à®¤à¯,
கà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®•à®¿à®±à®¤à¯ கà¯à®³à®¿à®°à¯ தூறலà¯,
வழியெஙà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ சேறà¯;
வணà¯à®Ÿà®¿ à®®à¯à®Ÿà®¿à®¯à¯à®®à®¾ பார௠- என
கவலைபà¯à®ªà®Ÿ யாரà¯à®®à®±à¯à®±à¯
வாழà¯à®¨à¯à®¤à®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à®²à®¾à®®à¯ - அலà¯à®²à®¤à¯
கசà¯à®šà¯‡à®°à®¿à®•à®³à¯ à®…à®±à¯à®± நாடà¯à®•à®³à®¿à®²à¯‡à®©à¯à®®à¯
பெயà¯à®¤à¯ தீரà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à®²à®¾à®®à¯ நீ...
ஆஙà¯à®•à¯ ஒர௠மழை நாளினà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®•à®³à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ பூமிகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
இடையிரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ வாயà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®¿à®´à®¨à¯à®¤
ஈரோட௠நாகராஜனà¯.
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
this is also about rain... (wrote last year)
தூய நீராயà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®³à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ இறஙà¯à®•à®¿,
à®…à®´à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ˆ அணைதà¯à®¤à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯Šà®£à¯à®Ÿà¯
ஆஙà¯à®•à®¾à®™à¯à®•à¯‡ தேஙà¯à®•à®¿,
கà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®µà®¿à®Ÿà¯à®Ÿ கà¯à®´à®¿à®•à®³à¯ வழியே
கூவதà¯à®¤à®¿à®²à¯ கà¯à®¤à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤ பினà¯...
சேரா இடநà¯à®¤à®©à®¿à®²à¯
சேறாயà¯à®šà¯ சேரà¯à®¨à¯à®¤ அவலம௠நொநà¯à®¤à¯,
பாதையில௠தழà¯à®µà®¿à®¯
இலைகளை-கிளைகளை
இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ சில பூகà¯à®•à®³à¯ˆ...
எணà¯à®£à®¿ எணà¯à®£à®¿ நகரà¯à®¨à¯à®¤à¯ போயà¯,
கரைகினà¯à®± உபà¯à®ªà¯ˆ
கரையறà¯à®±à¯à®•à¯ கொணà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
கரை தாணà¯à®Ÿà®¾ கடலினà¯à®³à¯à®³à¯‡
à®®à¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯ˆà®¯à®¿à®²à¯ கரிதà¯à®¤à¯,
பரிதியின௠பாரà¯à®µà¯ˆà®¯à®¿à®²à¯
à®…à®°à¯à®µà®®à®¾à®¯à¯à®ªà¯ பயணிதà¯à®¤à¯
காறà¯à®±à¯ வெளியிலà¯
கரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯Šà®£à¯à®Ÿ மேகமாயà¯
சகலமà¯à®®à¯ மறநà¯à®¤à¯ போயà¯
சகதியில௠மீணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯...
தூய நீராயà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®³à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ இறஙà¯à®•à®¿,
மனிதரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மழைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
வேறெனà¯à®© வேலையிஙà¯à®•à¯!
தூய நீராயà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®³à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ இறஙà¯à®•à®¿,
à®…à®´à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®•à®³à¯ˆ அணைதà¯à®¤à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯Šà®£à¯à®Ÿà¯
ஆஙà¯à®•à®¾à®™à¯à®•à¯‡ தேஙà¯à®•à®¿,
கà¯à®¤à¯à®¤à®¿à®µà®¿à®Ÿà¯à®Ÿ கà¯à®´à®¿à®•à®³à¯ வழியே
கூவதà¯à®¤à®¿à®²à¯ கà¯à®¤à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤ பினà¯...
சேரா இடநà¯à®¤à®©à®¿à®²à¯
சேறாயà¯à®šà¯ சேரà¯à®¨à¯à®¤ அவலம௠நொநà¯à®¤à¯,
பாதையில௠தழà¯à®µà®¿à®¯
இலைகளை-கிளைகளை
இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ சில பூகà¯à®•à®³à¯ˆ...
எணà¯à®£à®¿ எணà¯à®£à®¿ நகரà¯à®¨à¯à®¤à¯ போயà¯,
கரைகினà¯à®± உபà¯à®ªà¯ˆ
கரையறà¯à®±à¯à®•à¯ கொணà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
கரை தாணà¯à®Ÿà®¾ கடலினà¯à®³à¯à®³à¯‡
à®®à¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯ˆà®¯à®¿à®²à¯ கரிதà¯à®¤à¯,
பரிதியின௠பாரà¯à®µà¯ˆà®¯à®¿à®²à¯
à®…à®°à¯à®µà®®à®¾à®¯à¯à®ªà¯ பயணிதà¯à®¤à¯
காறà¯à®±à¯ வெளியிலà¯
கரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯Šà®£à¯à®Ÿ மேகமாயà¯
சகலமà¯à®®à¯ மறநà¯à®¤à¯ போயà¯
சகதியில௠மீணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯...
தூய நீராயà¯
தà¯à®³à®¿à®¤à¯à®¤à¯à®³à®¿à®¯à®¾à®¯à¯ இறஙà¯à®•à®¿,
மனிதரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ மழைகà¯à®•à¯à®®à¯
வேறெனà¯à®© வேலையிஙà¯à®•à¯!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
arasi:
Thanks!
erode14:
இரணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯‡ அ௫மை!
Here is one on pEi mazhai.
Thanks!
erode14:
இரணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®®à¯‡ அ௫மை!
Here is one on pEi mazhai.
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
Punarvasu,
Crucial Sollaik kOTTai viTTEnE! Thanks. Edited it now.
aravukkarasE!
um kavidai konjum, kanal enat taNindu SuDar viDum
karuttuc cerivuDan miLirum--
kaNakkenRAlum, nIr ezhuppum oliyilE kanivirukkum.
kANavum kETkavum AvaluDan---arasi
PB,
puduvaiyil innum bAratiyin tAkkam!
Crucial Sollaik kOTTai viTTEnE! Thanks. Edited it now.
aravukkarasE!
um kavidai konjum, kanal enat taNindu SuDar viDum
karuttuc cerivuDan miLirum--
kaNakkenRAlum, nIr ezhuppum oliyilE kanivirukkum.
kANavum kETkavum AvaluDan---arasi
PB,
puduvaiyil innum bAratiyin tAkkam!
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
That is a big story!arasi wrote:PB,
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Re: KavithaigaL by Rasikas
thank you pb and arasi...
this is one more about a ride in ECR in a rainy evening...
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this is one more about a ride in ECR in a rainy evening...
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