My NEW poem on Bilahari!!
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Here is my brand new poem on Bilahari!! It was requested by our own fellow member bilahari!! Sorry for the repeated references to Thyagarajar in this poem but I just couldn't get my mind off him!! Please tell me your feedback!!
BILAHARI for BRAVERY
The proud daughter of Saint Thyagaraja’s favourite[1],
You are a personification of bravery[2], but petite,
An invocation of happiness if we sing you,
Youngsters find solace in "Raravenu"
BILAHARI for BRAVERY
The proud daughter of Saint Thyagaraja’s favourite[1],
You are a personification of bravery[2], but petite,
An invocation of happiness if we sing you,
Youngsters find solace in "Raravenu"
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Deshakshi is an allied raga of Bilahari. This is the generally spoken idea. Some say, it is the hindustani equivalent of Bilahari. There are not many recordings of Deshakshi available to us. But I have heard some vidhwans like Sri M Balamuralikrishna render kritis. Some say Deshakshi has phrases that are different from Bilahari. The kritis that I know of in Deshakshi are "Saraseeruha nabhamudaaram" by Swati tirunal and Oothukkadu's Navavarnam "Santhatham Aham Seve". If any of you have recordings, please upload so that we can discuss further.
MDR's thillana can also be uploaded, if anybody has it.
Thanks to all for commenting!
MDR's thillana can also be uploaded, if anybody has it.
Thanks to all for commenting!
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Good poem, srinivasrgvn. As Punarvasu said, it is educative as well.
One enhacement would be to work in the characteristic prayogas and the jeeva and nyasa swaras of the raga. You have already mentioned the Jantai prayogas. Going by the general structure of your approach, you can work them in like this: ( just a suggestion for content, not meant to add to the poem itself! )
Some people opine G P D S N D P bring you up clean and clear
others say "......" for the same, but Oh, great Bilahari, you
show you are full of life in 'R N and D' while you take a rest at 'P and R'.
One enhacement would be to work in the characteristic prayogas and the jeeva and nyasa swaras of the raga. You have already mentioned the Jantai prayogas. Going by the general structure of your approach, you can work them in like this: ( just a suggestion for content, not meant to add to the poem itself! )
Some people opine G P D S N D P bring you up clean and clear
others say "......" for the same, but Oh, great Bilahari, you
show you are full of life in 'R N and D' while you take a rest at 'P and R'.
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