anbE shivam aruL - corrections requested

Lakshman · Post by **Lakshman** » 28 Mar 2007, 02:19

Here is a song by Periasami Tooran. If someone has the audio for this song, please check for errors. The song is sung by Sowmya on the Carnatic Pep Album. Thanks.

anbE shivam aruLE. rAgA: nalinakAnti. Adi tALA.

P: anbE shivam aruLE deivam AnrOr mozhi idai arindiDuvOmE
A: anbAl ulagam aDaittiDum pOdinil aduvE inba lOkam Agum
C: ellA uyirkkum inbam tEDuvOm innal enbad-adai vittai enrAkkuvOm
shollAl sheyalAl sorgam engamaikkum sOdararE pAri tozhuda nanumaiyE

mahakavi · Post by **mahakavi** » 28 Mar 2007, 06:51

I don't have the audio. But right off I can point out a couple of corrections in terms of context.
aDaittiDum ---> either aNaittiDum or azhaittiDum
engamaikkum ---> engumamaikkum (?)
pAri tozhuda nanumaiyE -- ??????? (meaning is not clear)

Lakshman:
After hearing the audio link that you sent me, here is the final version. Of course it becomes clear only after repeated playing/hearing of the song. The corrections on your version are bolded below.

P: anbE sivam aruLE deivam AnROr mozhiyidai aRindiDuvOmE
A: anbAl ulagam azhaittiDum pOdinil aduvE inbalOgamAgum
C1: ellA uyirkkum inbam tEDuvOm innal enbadanai illaiyenRAkkuvOm
C2: sollAl seyalAl sorgam eng(um)amaippOm sOdararE pAril tozhudanar umaiyE

Lakshman · Post by **Lakshman** » 28 Mar 2007, 22:52

Thanks for the corrections Mahakavi.

mahakavi · Post by **mahakavi** » 29 Mar 2007, 03:23

I still am not comfortable with the word "en(gu)amaippOm" although that is what it sounds like. It could very well be "ingamaippOm".

ninjathegreat · Post by **ninjathegreat** » 29 Mar 2007, 05:31

doesn't ingamaippom make more sense?