olide yAtakammA - corrections requested

[Lakshman]

Someone please correct the errors. Thanks.


olide yAtakammA lakumI. rAgA: bAgEshrI. Adi tALA. Gopaladasa.

P: olide yAtakammA lakumI vAsudEvagE
A: halavandadavana avanE tiLidu tiLidu tiLidu tiLiyAdhAnandA
C1: kamala gaNTi kOmalAngi sundarAdya vadanE nIvu
ramaNa matsya kaThiNa kAya sUkarAtyanU
ramaNiyE svarUpi nInu amita ghOra rUpanavanu
namipaniSTa dAri nInu dAnava vEDuvanigE nI
2: jANE ratnAkarana magaLu tAnu shuddha bhrugu janavanu
amanadAbdya sadane nInu vanavAsI avanU
mAnya pativrateyu nInu nAnA yOsiSTAni avanu
jnAna citra vasanE nInu hIna caila nAgavanigE
3: pavana vArte kELidavaru ollarO samsAravannu
avana mUrti nODi maneya hanava viDuvarO
avanapurake pOra janaru ommiganda siruki bararO
avanutAne tanayarannu tannavaya madinda paDidavanige
4: svayata anapEkSa kAmiyavannu nidrA hIna anAshana
paruSarUpa vAkya shabda amita bhOtanu
guru gOpAla viTThalanu niruta kanna vakSasthaLadoLu
aramaNeya mADittu ninagE maralu mADida mAyAdEvI

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Respected Lakshman Sir,
Here is the corrected version of the kirtana::

olide yAtakammA lakumI. rAgA: bAgEshrI. Adi tALA. Gopaladasa.

P: olide yAtakammA lakumI vAsudEvagE
A: halavandadavana avanE tiLidu tiLidu tiLidu tiLiyAdhAnga
C1: kamala ganDhi kOmalAngi sundarsyA vadanE nInu
ramaNa matsya kaThiNa kAya sUkarAsyanU
ramaNIya svarUpi nInu amita ghOra rUpanavanu
namipariSTa dAyi nInu dAnava bEDuvanigE nI
2: jANe ratnAkarana magaLu tAnu shuddha bhrugu janavanu
AnandAbja sadane nInu vanavAsI avanU
mAnya pativrateyu nInu nAnA yOsiSTAni avanu
jnAna citra vasanE nInu hIna caila nAdavanigE
3: avana vArte kELidavaru ollarO samsAravannu
avana mUrti nODi maneya hanava biDuvarO
avanapurake pOva janaru ommiganda tirugi bararO
avanu tAnE tanayarannu tannavayava dinda paDedavanige
4: svayata anapEkSa kAmiyavanu nidrA hIna anAshana
paruSarUpa vAkya shabda amita BhOktanu
guru gOpAla viTThalanu niruta tanna vakSasthaLadoLu
aramaNeya mADittu ninagE maralu mADida mAyA dEvI

[Lakshman]

Thanks very much Savitri.