Dear All,
Would like to share my humble effort towards Swathi Thirunal krithi - sarasijanAbha murArE in Thodi. Please provide me your feedbacks and valuable suggestions
http://soundcloud.com/unny-3/thodi-sarasijanaabha
Unnykrish
My rendition - sarasijanAbha murArE - Thodi
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srikant1987
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Re: My rendition - sarasijanAbha murArE - Thodi
(1) Make shruti audible!
(2) Many times your ni, particularly in snd, like "pA"hi satatam, comes as kAkali ni.
(3) Your second half of the pallavi doesn't land on eduppu.
(2) Many times your ni, particularly in snd, like "pA"hi satatam, comes as kAkali ni.
(3) Your second half of the pallavi doesn't land on eduppu.
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Rsachi
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Re: My rendition - sarasijanAbha murArE - Thodi
Mr. Unni,
Listening to this track may help you a bit:
http://raa.ag/t228998.
Todi has very distinct and strong contours and you could kindly work on it.
Listening to this track may help you a bit:
http://raa.ag/t228998.
Todi has very distinct and strong contours and you could kindly work on it.
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Unnykrish
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Re: My rendition - sarasijanAbha murArE - Thodi
Thank you, will definitely work on the suggestions.