Correction-vA murugA vA - bEgaDA

[prashant]

Could someone make corrections [if required] in the lyrics to this song by Sri R. Venugopal? I copy below the lyrics originally located at http://www.geocities.com/promiserani2/c1502.html

pallavi

vaa murugaa vaa
vaDivazhaagaa shanmugaa vaa
(vaa)

anupallavi

maamarai poruLE nee vaa
varagilaada aruLE vaa
tEn madura suvaiyE vaa
teeraa yen vinai deera nee vaa
(vaa)

caraNam

seytava payanE shivaguru deivamE nee vaa vaa
sheelanE shivagaami baalanE shree vaLLi vilOlanE vaa
poigai tavazh mei poruLE bhOdagnyaana vEda shuDarE
puNya deena sharanya divya laavanya shree subramanya kaaruNya
(vaa) (vaa murugaa vaa, nee vaa murugaa vaa, vaa vaa murugaa vaa)

The peerless DKJ Sir renders this song: http://file.uploadr.com/f8f8

[Lakshman]

Here is what I have:

vA murugA vA. rAgA: bEgaDa. rUpaka tALA.

P: vA murugA vA vadivazhagA SaNmukhA vA
A: mAmarai poruLE nI vA varai ilAda aruLE vA tEmadhura suvaiyE vA IrA en vinai tIra nI vA
C: sheida parp-payanE shiva guru deivamE nI vA vA shIlanE shivakAmi bAlanE shri vaLLi vilOlanE nI vA
poighai tarum nI poruLE bOdha jnAna vEda shuDarE puNya dInasharaNya divya lAvaNya shrI subrahmaNya kAruNya

[mahakavi]

mAmarai ---> mAmaRai
IrA en vinai---> tIrA en vinai
sheida parp-payanE---->seytavap payanE (the fruit of the penance performed)
poigai tarum -----> poygai tavazh (meaning floating on the pond)

I'd post the Thamizh text here (for clarity) but resist that desire on two counts.
1. prashant may not benefit since he may not (?) be able to read Thamizh text.
2. I do not want to incur the wrath of the admin by posting undesirable language text.

[prashant]

Thanks a lot to all of you for your help.

[gb]

I know this song is one of DKJ's favorite. can someone post the recording..
Thanks in advance

[kutty]

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