Proofreading of lyrics request

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kmrasika
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Proofreading of lyrics request

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Appreciate if someone could correct/proofread the lyrics to this lullaby and if possible, provide brief meaning. Transcribed from rendition: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMXyRa9BRzg

rāgam: āṉanda bairavi
pallavi
nāṉ māṭal kōṭal nakar
kōṉ vāḻum māḷikaiyil
mīṉākṣiyām cella makaḷ
kaṇvaḷara tālēlō

aṉupallavi
āṇe poṉ toṭṭililē - māṇikka karaṅkaḷiṉāl
rāṇi kāñcaṉamālai - āṭukiṟāl tālēlō
caraṇam 1

rāgam:nīlāmbari
marakatam pōl pacumēṉi - aṟataṉam pōl cēvaṭikaḷ
irattaṉam olikkum kiḷiyum - āṭiṭumē tālēlō
(parai?)maṟaimuḻaṅka patiyēṟi - piṟaiccūṭi eṉ veḷḷai
varaiveḷḷa pōvālē - taḷar nakaiyai tālēlō
caraṇam 1

rāgam:mōhaṉam
ceṅkaṇ(/ḷ?) māḷaṇṇaṉum - aṅkayarkaṉṉi ivaḷai
caṅkarar suntarēcarkku maṇam ceyvār tālēlō
imaiyārum vaṇaṅkum - imaippōrkkum aruḷum
imaiyārkaṇ koḷḷa kayalviḻiyē tālēlō

In tamizh:
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Pratyaksham Bala
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Re: Proofreading of lyrics request

Post by Pratyaksham Bala »

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A few corrections :

கோடல் நகர் -- கூடல் நகர்
ஆணெ பொன் -- ஆணிப் பொன்
ஆடுகிறால் -- ஆடுகிறாள்
அறதனம் -- அரதனம்
செங்கண் மாளண்ணன் -- செங்கண் மாலண்ணன்

Pratyaksham Bala
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Re: Proofreading of lyrics request

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மறை முழங்க படி ஏறி
பிறைசூடியான் வெள்ளைவரை
வெல்லப் போவாளே
???

பிறைசூடியான் - Shiva
வெள்ளைவரை - White mountain - Mount Kailash

Pratyaksham Bala
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Re: Proofreading of lyrics request

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ஆணிப்பொன் - Gold of the finest quality
அரதனம் - A precious stone

ajaysimha
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Re: Proofreading of lyrics request

Post by ajaysimha »

tuning of the the first stanza in ananda bhairavi reminds me of NAANAATCHI SEITHU VARUM https://youtu.be/FUAz0pWVwXQ

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