Corrections needed

Lakshman · Post by **Lakshman** » 17 Jul 2008, 19:11

Someone please correct thew errors in this song. Thanks.

rAghavEndra rAghavEndra bhajisuvada yAkidE EkO edO vEre illA bhEdanAgidEtidE
A: bEku bEku endu nAnu adanu idanu mADadE matte matte bandhudellA guruvErillA hELidE
C: alli illi ninna nODi tiLiyade hOgidE kaNDanilla meneye ondE rAghavEndra svAmiyE

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PUNARVASU · Post by **PUNARVASU** » 17 Jul 2008, 19:25

I had learnt a slightly different version.

rAghaveNdra rAghavEndra bhajisuvAseyAgidE EkO EnO bEreyellA bEsarAgibittidE
A- bEku bEku endu nAnu adanu idanu mAdidE matte matte bandudellA guruve ninna hesarigE
C-alli illi ninna nOdi tiLiyadE hOgidE kaNdadella nanage ondE rAghvEndra swAmiyE.

Corrections welcome.Thanks

vs_manjunath · Post by **vs_manjunath** » 17 Jul 2008, 21:52

Punarvasu's version is more meaningful.

Lakshman · Post by **Lakshman** » 17 Jul 2008, 22:01

Thanks Manjunath.

Sreeni Rajarao · Post by **Sreeni Rajarao** » 17 Jul 2008, 23:53

I see a need for two minor corrections in Punarvasu's version:
Anupallavi : ....................................................................................guruve ninna hesarigE
carana: ..................................................... kaNdadella nanage (or enage) ondE .....................

PUNARVASU · Post by **PUNARVASU** » 18 Jul 2008, 00:16

SreeniRajarao,
thanks for the corrections;the second one was typo and I just realised it.
nanage means 'for me' isn't it?
nenage means 'for you'?
Thanks once again.

arasi · Post by **arasi** » 18 Jul 2008, 00:48

ninage= to you, for you