correction of text requested

[Lakshman]

Would someone please check the text and post the corrections? Thanks.

P: venkaTEsha mAiNTiki visheSavaiyya vankalanna bhOgaiyya valacina nIvADanaiyya
C1: asanalu levanini vlagakuma mA antaranga melaniku asanamega Agyapadya
snAnadula kai alaga kumA Ananda bAspale amalaganga jalamuga
2: vindulEni cEsevani veravakuma Andapuma matale arudai na vinduga
candanampu sEyanamukai cAlanu ceyakai cendinama yada painasayanincavaiyya
3: kapura pUvidimedi kasarakumA mA caparani bhavama nikuvidimayya
mAyanilo..palanuna yentanistamAya anna maya patalatu alarintu mayya

[Rigapada]

Dear Lakshman,
This is my first attempt. Red is for doubtful places.
The lyrics are very nice. It is not clear who the author is!


P: vEMkaTEsha mA iMTiki viccEyavaiyya, vaMkalenna bOkaiyya, valacina nii vADanaiyya

C1: AsanAlu lEvani nii valagakumA, mA aMtaraMgame niiku asanamuga,
arghya-pAdya-snAnadulakai alagakumA, AnaMda bAshpAlE amala gaMga jalamuga

2: viMdulEMi cEsEmani veravakumA, AMdapu mA mATalE arudaina viMduga

caMdanaMpu seyanamukai calamu cEyaka, i cendina ma yada paina sayaniMcavaiyya

3: karpura pU videmEdani kasarakumA, mA caparani bhavama niku videmayya

mAyanilo..palanuna yentanistamAya, annamayya pAtalatO alariMtumayya

--Rigapada

[Lakshman]

Thanks Rigapada for your efforts.

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In the 3rd line "chaparani bhavame' [unexplicable emotion] would be meaningful?
and in the same line"mAyani lopalanu nee yentanistamaya" [unhealed shortcomings would be offered to you?]
may be apt.This is my maiden attempt in telugu corrections.
This may be a kriti of Sri Annamacharyagaru.